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I'm going to assume that dynamics were intentionally left out, as well as articulations and bowings and the like.
Generally it's fine I think. I think the long descending flute line that's doubled by the violin could either change instruments (as it gets lower perhaps the clarinet or oboe could take over, or the viola could take over and the violin could play longer notes) or possibly add instruments so it's not an extended passage of the same colors. Just a though.
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