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It's basically a wall of sound. That's it. It doesn't sound good. It's cliche. Boring. Overall, if you plan to post something, put some time and effort into it please.
Tips-
Silence is important
Playing all instrument at once is tiresome.
Nothing special about going up and down the scale
Think of a more original idea for your theme.
Your ideas don't connect well, fix it.
It's obvious you don't know how to write for the instruments. I found it hard to believe it was a concerto. It's more like a typical orchestra piece featuring a harp and koto.
You did a bad job at mixing eastern and western music.
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