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I like this composition. To me it does capture a mood of obsession quite well and does have a lot of rhythmic interest. The ending is not bad but perhaps not the strongest part although I don't have a suggestion on how to end a piece with this mood in a better fashion.
The piece does have a structure made up of short motives that repeat. That creates the mood. But possibly putting in a longer slower middle section would allow some further exploration of the main themes.
For one day of work it is really quite good.
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