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I like this piece a lot. It's quite obsessive, indeed. There's not much, musically that I had any problems with, but at around bar 123, it's relatively messy. There are 16th rests all over the place, and that part in particular would be hard, rhythmically to read and play. I think that part needs to be cleaned up.
Edit: Oh, you already know it's messy. Then there's no point for this comment.
Good job, anyway.
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