First off, let me restate what I said earlier. I in no way aim for perfection, though maybe I should. This composition is probably incredibly flawed (I just know it is...) Also, let me remind you that I play by ear and can't read notes...therefore, I know not how to write scores and such. I apologize for this inconvenience and amateurity.
Even with all of this, I hope that my work is worthy of some critiques and feedback. I promise I'll be open-minded (as long as the critique is acceptably respectful, I dont appreciate bashing.

) Thank ya all very much!
The Second Star To The Right
EDIT: I'm also sorry if this piece doesnt belong in this topic .-.