Originally Posted by tenor10

Welcome to YC!!! First and for most.
Secondly, don't be so hard on your self. Because what you have here is actually really beautiful. The way you've re-imagined this classic tune is really nice. I would strongly encourage you to learn how to read music. Thats not criticizing you, its stating a fact that will help you for the rest of your life, especially if you really want to go into composition.
Also, work on keeping your legato, the flow of the piece. There were a few times where the flow got choppy.
Really you have some nice stuff here. Stay positive! We arnt as mean here as you've perceived us.
Keep up the good work. STAY POSITIVE!!!