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I thought this was a very well crafted piece. Nevertheless:
1. There appears to be only four woodwind parts. Are they meant to be doubled? Having only four wind players could lead to them being severely overpowered by the other instruments specified here.
2. What is the deal with the 3 piano staves? Did you want two players or one? This could be clarified by creating 2 or 4 staves.
3. I could not pick up an overall structure when listening to the piece. Even if this was intentional, I think the piece could be enhanced by a sense of direction. As it was, the ending felt quite abrupt.
Well done though. Some very nice ideas and orchestration.
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