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Simen,
I think this movement is excellent. I liked your tasteful modulations and chords. The only thing I would ask more of is dissonance. It seems very consonant. I especially liked the fact that this piece was extremely cohesive, which is something that many pieces lack. It stuck in my mind when I finished listening to it too... Good Job!
EDIT: I think that a prolonged minor key variation of the theme could really bring some needed contrast to the movement.
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Favorite composers: Beethoven, Schubert, Mendelssohn, Bach, Schumann
Playable instruments: Saxophones, Violin, Clarinet, Piano
Favorite pieces: Mendelssohn Symphony 1------------------------------------ 
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