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Jut some quick notes before I head off to work.
You have some nice things working in your favor. However, I feel you should connect some of your ideas better. Some things just appear to pop in out of no where, then die and then something else appears. Try to have some sense of continuity. Lastly your dynamics basically range from medium to LOUD. Try to be a bit more crafty with your dynamics.
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