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I didn't consider it anything highly remarkable but the coda was pretty epic; I was pretty happy about that. You did express your want to rework the ending which is understandable but I like the general feel of the ending as it stands now.
On the contrary, I kinda like the structural obscurity and wonky continuity. (Though, admittedly, it was borderline obnoxious.) Notwithstanding, if that was your intent, you've executed it quite smashingly.
Also, the piece didn't seem very adequately "wolfy" or "foresty."
But I did enjoy it.
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