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I listened to this a couple of times. I think it's a little long, or maybe you could break it up into different files/movements. Gives some breathing room in between.
I liked some of the stuff you did with the rhythms and chords, but a lot of it also reminded me of action music. I dunno, for what your intention is, I figured you'd go for a lot more jarring contrasts.
Maybe you could've expanded a little on the harmonic side, but well. If you're happy with the outcome, that's all that matters. As far as the ending is concerned, I sorta didn't really see it coming and it sorta just fades out in a way. That's why maybe it'd benefit from clearer divisions, so you could prepare the ending better, perhaps?
Just sayin'.
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