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I quite liked this piece and felt that it did sound well-crafted and fluent. Overall, if you were aiming for the style of Beethoven... then I think you achieved it, given where you are at in terms of composing, so in that sense you're on the right track.
What I would suggest in this piece is possibly looking for another theme to incorporate in there. I think you took a somewhat uninspiring theme at first and developed it very well throughout into a satisfying product. Looking through the piece however, it appeared that all the significant material was derived from the one theme. If you gave yourself more musical material to work with, you could extend this work to a more satisfying length and give more scope for development.
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