I thought a lot of this was really nice. The harmony around 0:30 begins to sound a little unsure of itself, due primarily to the removal of the triadic grounding present in the previous section. Nice use of the disruptive pedal note later on to keep the listener on their toes. I thought the ending was too prepared and decisive for such a dreamy piece - perhaps just finish on a slowed, drawn-out version of those 7/9 chords?
^ Probably mostly subjective suggestions. Thanks for sharing, a nice way to unwind.
