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Old Apr 29 2008, 3:00 PM
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There is a problem in measures 39-40 isn't there?

The melodic line ventures outside the range of the violin. Are you employing Klangfarbenmelodie? LOL
But seriously, is this acceptable? I'm orchestration-illiterate.

Another thing in measure 40: I think the phrase is unnecessarily terminated (the melodic line in the violin should end with an A flat as in the original sonata, don't you think?).

I think this project is going swimmingly, but man you are committing a mortal sin of bumping. Repent!!
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