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Old Apr 29 2008, 5:55 PM
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Originally Posted by cygnusdei View Post
There is a problem in measures 39-40 isn't there?

The melodic line ventures outside the range of the violin. Are you employing Klangfarbenmelodie? LOL
But seriously, is this acceptable? I'm orchestration-illiterate.

Another thing in measure 40: I think the phrase is unnecessarily terminated (the melodic line in the violin should end with an A flat as in the original sonata, don't you think?).

I think this project is going swimmingly, but man you are committing a mortal sin of bumping. Repent!!
Thanks for commenting!
The violin is out of range? If it went out of range, the notes would turn red. At least, they do in Sibelius. Where do you see the violin going out of range?

and... bumping??
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