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I think what you have is pretty interesting as of yet, though I do have some suggestions...
Try varying the pace a bit, perhaps have some moments of unresolved tension with no rhythm whatsoever (ie.. moments of silence)
Silence is a incredibly powerful force in music, the first note heard after silence is sometimes the most powerful. I think you could do well to take advantage of the fact and try inputting it in some places.
that's all I can think of right off, hope it helps
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