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I'd say the two main sections are a bit to monotone becourse there is no use of rhythmic variation between the two. Since rhythem is a very predominant feature of this piece i think you could have made use of a rhythmic disctinction between the two main sections. The two main sections are quit monotone in atmosphere too.
You have a nice heterophonic writhing style here. The development has some nice moments with catchy motives.
Around the middle of the piece the rythem indeed becomes jarring. I realy like the second coda with the high cresending notes. You made great use of the sonata form and the ending was very suitable to my taste.
Overall the piece was too monotone but the nice heterophonic writingstyle and use of form made up for it.
Nice piece.
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