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Okay
It has a beautiful, headresting atmosphere. I realy love how the second theme is interwoven in the main theme. I think though you anticipated to much on the final ending. When the second theme first enters it feels like it will end and the whole section too the end after the second theme ended after it's second appearance felt like it would end in the next bar. I understand the idea and think it is suiting, but i do think you make use of it to much. Especiallly the beginning to the second ending of the second theme is very nice in my opinion.
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