I only listed to To Lydia, I'll comment on the other at a later time (I'm vewy vewy tired). This piece is very simple, yet very passionate. It's obvious you poured emotion into this one, the voice is extremely clear in its intentions. I'm not the one to talk about form, in fact, I'm horrible with it...please teach me lol. Anyway, i liked this piece. My only minor (and i do mean minor) beef with it is that I think you could of used some more interesting chords to give it a better feel, but again, that's something I had to force out just because I rather enjoyed the simplicity of the piece. In fact, making it more spicy might ruin the mood....so...ya...I liked it
BTW, welcome to YC! I hope you stick around, we don't bite....well, i mean we DO bite, but either way it's still a fun place to be!
Vince