View Single Post
  #3 (permalink)  
Old May 3 2008, 6:04 AM
gijs van beusekom gijs van beusekom is offline

learning composer
Group: Members
Joined: 30-December 06
Posts: 167
Member Number: 1958
So welcome jsoldi,

I listended to lydia and found it rather beautiful. The mood you create an it's tramsformation into the "well goodbye then" feeling is realy clearly feelable and reconizable. This is do to your interpretation of it, but it's very nice. The only thing i would argue for is to have some clearer organized statenments in the middle section. I might just be me, but that part just goes along a bit. Overall it's a realy nice, touching piece. Have you shown it to lydia? Or is that out of the question?

As for the Tango sonata, I think you managed to combine the dramatic tango/latin melodies and typical classical elements very nice. I Felt like the piece lost it's direction towards the end(around 4.10), but this is also a nice piece.

If you struckle with finishing piece you can try to work on multiple project at the same time. Maybe you already do so, but for me that works. I finish one, am halfway another and just started a thirth you know. Well nice pieces and espacially lydia made an impression on me.

If you want more reviews post a score, some people won't review unless there is one and those are often the people who can be realy helpfull. I never post a score, but if you have one be sure to post it.
Reply With Quote