I must say that I liked it...I'm not good at 'critiquing' music so I will just tell you what I liked about it
1: Loved the trills and tremolos.
2: I liked the bass part when it had qavers e.g. bars 43, 44, 46, 47 etc...
Lastly: I liked the ending with the semiquavers.
But in general, I really enjoyed it.