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Old May 9 2008, 10:26 AM
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A good groove. Nice melody. Cool backgrounds. Not terribly inventive or ambitious, but that's not really the point now, is it?

One thing that might solidify the tune a bit would be some sort of drastic textural change. You have very cool instrumental options - flute, vibes, violin... would be nice to change the groove a bit more, perhaps a short break-down section somewhere. BUT...whatever.

Are you hip to Groove Collective?

Nigel, your writing has progressed quite a bit, I hope you keep up with this.
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