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Gorecki? No i think Frederik got it when he said early Schubert overture. Occasional lifts from Beethoven.
Obviously this is not the first piece you have written or orchestrated. The writing is confident and the orchestration sounds quite convincing in a late-classical or early Romantic style. I have to say that the transitions or lack of them didnt worry me at all. I generally never use them anyway - it makes the music too smooth. A bit of Beethoven-type drama is good.
I suppose my main comment would be that given that this piece suggests a certain amount of experience and ability in writing, maybe you should go the next step and try to develop a more personal style. Maybe this is an unreasonable suggestion but music has changed lot since 1828.