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Old May 10 2008, 4:36 PM
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I can hardly call it a symphony if it doesn't start with sonata form. I can't really think of one symphony that doesn't start with Sonata form.

I'd rather call it... an orchestral piece...

At 1:03 to 1:24ish, you repeat that sequence 4 times. I don't think you need to repeat it for than three. Further, the ending is so plane. With all the great stuff you added during the rest of the piece why did you chose huge block chords to finish the piece? I think you could work on the ending a little more. Other than that it's a nice piece.
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