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Old May 12 2008, 3:21 AM
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I thought your performance was quite nice. Dan is right though - if you post a video then expect comments on more than just the audio. If all you want us to talk about is the sound, then don't post a video Pretty simple. Also, I'm going to hope that you're not another one of those people who just come around looking for compliments on their work: you'll find yourself in tough company for that kind of constantly-optimistic feedback around here.

Having said that, I think your technique is a bit tense, as was previously mentioned, but you seem to "get" the piece and your movements are emotionally relevant if not specifically necessary. The piece was performed nicely enough, and I certainly enjoyed listening to you, but I can't say that I was particularly moved by your performance. Your tempo was not particularly problematic for me, even though I personally prefer the piece slightly slower - I think it has stronger effect that way.

For reference, I'll link you to a performance that I think is quite nice in that it is clear, expressive (without being excessive) and professional-sounding. At a tempo closer to yours, I thought Gould's interpretation was particularly sharp. Anyways, enjoy it and see if you can learn anything from it, along with the others we've linked you to.
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Beethoven - Pathétique - 3. Rondo: Allegro W.Nänni
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Good luck and thanks for sharing.
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