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Old May 13 2008, 1:09 PM
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An unfinished score with no dynamics, no articulations and no tempo changes gives a playback lacking musicality. The piece has some good moments but would benefit from more rhythmic variety and a stronger bass line.

It isn't clear for what level of difficulty this is intended - the lower parts are mostly very simple and would be uninteresting for strong players. If the idea is that the bottom two parts accompany the upper two, which are featured, then perhaps replacing them with a piano part would make sense.
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