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There's a certain harmonic tension in it that belies your stated intention of "peaceful and cheery town". It could be all the augmented 4ths you use, as well as the certain harmonic instablity.
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"Those that know, do;
Those that understand, teach."
-Aristotle-
"toute audace engendrée par l'ignorance cesse d'être une audace et devient une maladresse"
-Debussy-
In musical criticism, when issues of craft and technical consideration are set aside, what remains is more subjective. However, until technical issues are dealt with, the subjective portion bears considerably less weight.
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