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I actualy realy liked it. The first movement is sounds very sereen and unpretensious Very nice. The second movement fits wounderfully after the first movenment. I will suggest to make the melodies a bit more personal, try some to include some climaxes and downfalls. But if you leave it this way and finish it in the same manner as what you have so far, i'm sure i'll come out realy nice. At least in my opinion this very nice and have no idea what you are worrying about. If your main worry is whether or not to finish it, i'd say: FINISH IT!
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