Thread: 1st piano piece
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Old May 17 2008, 8:20 PM
SSUChris SSUChris is offline

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I also think it is good for a first piano piece. One thing I think, maybe, that you forgot was to add the F-sharp in measure 8. You have an F-sharp on the first F, but not the lower one. Maybe that is what you wanted, but just so you know. But good job on your first piano. (I like the key of G as well)
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