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Welcome to YC.
Just a hint to help you along the way in YC. The more music here that you comment on will help you to get more comments on your music. With a lot of us here, if you comment on one of ours, we will return the favor.
You are right that some places in this would really be helped with a solo, peerhaps even a few different instruments in those areas.
Overall it was a nice piece.
Ron
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