Maxx this is very good and I can tell you've got a really good ear, but I must say this to you!
It would be well worth your time to listen to some older film music/music from the romantic period. Somebody on here made the same suggestion to me when I posted a piece, and I have never looked back. I think you have much potential, but a piece like this doesn't do anything to me
(sorry!) Essentially, modern film music is very limited.
Listen to this music
YouTube - Music of Bernard Herrmann - LA Philharmonic skip Tom Hanks by starting it at 2:00.
Basically you need some more dissonance to enhance your consonance. I hope this doesn't come off as being harsh; I honestly think you have a lot of potential, but for me modern film music is very clinical.