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Old May 19 2008, 5:38 PM
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I did like it. Although i felt it lacked some emotional deepness. In other words it stayed a bit to flat for my taste. The variations are quite contrasting, so i like that. I think you did well, although i think i can use a bit more of personality. Since the piece is very tonal and here and there aspiring to be reaching out, i feel it lacked a bit for that matter.
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