Thanks very much for your commentary Majesty, I really do appreciate it.
I understand why the theme restatement in the B section could make things just a bit too repetitive - I did try to combat this slightly by playing the A section first
ordinario then
sul tasto, but that didn't come out too well in the recording - appears that my mic glossed over the better parts of my performance and accentuated the string noise and the mistakes!
I would definitely like a restatement of the theme to extent at that point, but perhaps it could do with varying slightly? I could try, for example, writing a different 'answer' to the first 2 bar phrase of the theme, so the theme would still appear, but bars 19 and 20 would be more development as opposed to simple repetition as they are now?
Again, thank you very much for your comments
