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Thanks for listening guys.
Matthaeus, very detailed comments thanks!
If I can say something here:
-I added slurs just for the finale sound to be more smooth.
-I've just noticed the aug 2nd in bar 5..agh..that's 5 points off
-Bar 11 and 12, didn't see that Jump to octave.
-If you have an interval of 12 to another 12, does that count as if it was parallel 5ths?
-Last chord I had no choice but to double the 3rd.
Thanks for pointing those mistakes out. I tried really hard to check for parallel 5ths and octaves, but in the end I guess there's still mistakes.
-J
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