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Very nice work!
I think maybe there's room for a bit more development before the second rise in 00:58, it's just coming to a peak too soon, I think you could have gotten more out of that melody.
I liked the playful woodwinds and pizzicato in the middle section,
maybe a bit over the top with the chimes in the reprise?
Nice touch of harp, very tasteful.
Good work!
Omri.
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