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The introduction is somewhat boring. That's my initial thought, because it doesn't feel like it's building, even though it's getting louder. (Edit - As I was typing this, I was likening it to ISIS - some stuff can get to the point of 'almost' boring, but then it changes, and you realize that everything had to happen the way it did for this awesome moment to happen. It's a similar situation here.) I dig the sample of the guy talking. It's a little weird but it's got nice sound quality to it.
This is the kind of thing that MIDI can't do justice to. At all. This is like putting an ISIS song into MIDI. It just doesn't sound good. I like the use of inversions - not everything is a power chord. The bass helps that a lot. It reminds me a bit of Red Sparrowes as well.
If this isn't MIDI, then the song would be helped a lot by a better guitar tone, and better cymbals.
Aroudn 5:30 ish, I would recommend making the bass, instead of eighth notes all the way through, play the rhythm from the introduction.
I think this is well done.
What instruments do you play? Also, how old are you, and where do you live?
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