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Oh Damn it Mael!
I absolutely adored the entire thing, i can literally feel the jeebies jumping in my stomach!
HOWEVER! From page 68, i would probably consider that your coda/finale? am i right?
If not, I felt that from the forte pick up on that page (bar 458-end) was your finale.
So then i was like, woohoo, here we go...its gonna be an awesome finish...and then...I got to the last 2 pages...and yes, good idea to have the timpani roll us out, but...it was soo...like...ARGH, come on!!! SMITE ME ALREADY!!!!!
haha
I'm not saying it was terrible, Im just saying that I wish the final was more thicker, and awesomer than it is now.
Other than that, I can't offer any technical advice. But can I say: if this were to introduce an opera/ballet...it would be one of those overtures that completely outshine the rest of the show.
Frig! you are awesome!
If this doesn't get you fame one day, I don't know what will.
Kudos!
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Currently Working on: Piano Trio in B -flat. Polonaise in A major E minor Lament for solo Guitar. Fantasy in A flat Major for Piano (left hand).
Sleepy Hollow Ballet, Insects Ballet, Atlantis Opera, Gibberish Opera.
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