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A section...harder to comprehend. sometimes the ideas don't have a very natural flow...not saying this is bad. However, I feel that a better transition into B could occur. I appreciate the abstractness of the piece even in the B section..It actually reminds me somewhat of a sax quartet I am working on, but maybe allow a melody that is more comprehensible combined with the slightly unusual harmony at the beginning would make the piece more intelligible.
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