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Originally Posted by benxiwf
A section...harder to comprehend. sometimes the ideas don't have a very natural flow...not saying this is bad. However, I feel that a better transition into B could occur. I appreciate the abstractness of the piece even in the B section..It actually reminds me somewhat of a sax quartet I am working on, but maybe allow a melody that is more comprehensible combined with the slightly unusual harmony at the beginning would make the piece more intelligible.
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Thanks for listening.
I did make a lot of revisions to the transitions. They are greatly improved over what I had originally.
Of course, a composer always finds his own works intelligible. To some extent, there is a trade off between intelligibility and originality in that something in an old established style is always easier to understand.
Herb