Thanks Jamie for you reply and your advices. I tried to change the bass line where you said but it doesnt convince me even because I would have to change the second guitar rhythm as well and it sounds weird, maybe because I m so used to the song as it is.
About the song quality: I know midi is crap but it does the job to conserve the melodies you want to reproduce. Hopefully, if I`ll be rich enough I`m gonna get everything played an recorded by humans at the beginning of next year.
In a way is funny that loads of people evoke this similarity with Isis which I cant deny is present although I have listened to one album of Isis (Panopticon) probably three times
Here you can find another song I ve uploaded in the past for "Young composers" purposes and it would be interesting if you tell me your opinion about it, as I can see you have knowledge of the musical genre I do.
And to respond to your final question: I play no instruments and have never done a musical course, I just follow my hear. I`m 23 hailing from Italy but living in the UK.
