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I would love to start work on this thing. I think that it needs a bit better organization/ commitment, however.
I have an idea for the plot as well. instead of having the baby thing, perhaps we could go back to one of the beginning ideas of the play culminating in fake girl (who is really a personification of the man himself) attempting to kill the real one. I would suggest that as a fun little plot twist, he fights with the fake girl (himself) in his head (make it a monologue) and eventually tears the gun out of 'her' hands, accidentally turning it on himself, and in the struggle, pulls the trigger.
just an idea.
anyhow, I would love to see this sucker get up and running.
BTW... Hello YC! I haven't posted in a long while... my hiatus is over!
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