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Old May 26 2008, 5:49 PM
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Hey tariq,
Nice stuff and ideas here. Some score isses though. Watch the crowding of the staves, make sure they dont overlap. Also, the note head for spoken text is an x, look on fianle to try to find it. Finally, dynamic for singers always go above the staff. .
A lot of the chords are nice, like everyone has been saying the alto line is say to high. Consider some revoicing of the chords. Some of the chords around mes. 47 were a little sudden for me. The end as well was really sudden and abrupt, i dont i just felt weird.
Other than that pretty nice.
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