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Hi,
I really like your composition style but it does seem somewhat similar to the previous piece in the way that it features minimalism building up to a crescendo with a choir entry. I think it would be cool if you varied the time signatures or added some rhythmic interest may 6/8 sections or 5/4.
The harmony is pretty nice but I think you could extend it to make it richer, especially with the feel of the piece stuff like Gm9 (with no 5th). But that's just me, liked the piece just didn't seem that new from you.
Chris
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