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I can't read the word "must" without a bad taste in my mouth anymore.
Anyway, it seems like those lyrics work for your song, but your song was pretty static for the most part. Yeah You made it sound a bit cool as the verses ended, but the bridges were pretty weak and boring.
I think if you add more variety into your rhythm it might have been able to keep my attention longer and I wouldn't have this fucking urge to murder the next person I see.
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