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hello!
first of all, great piece. You have an excellent grasp of the classical idiom while still making it your own piece.
I have a few complaints, though. I thought that some of your dissonances needed to be resolved (1:21 for example). Also, some of the gaps in the piece break up the flow (2:54 for example). Finally, make sure that you have phrases of a consistent length. That way, the listener won't be confused.
Overall, great piece and it was a pleasure to listen to it.
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Favorite composers: Beethoven, Bruch, Mendelssohn, Bach, Schumann
Playable instruments: Saxophones, Violin, Clarinet, Piano
Favorite pieces: F.M-B.:String Quartet in A minor ------------------------------------ 
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