Ok!
Hi Katchum!
First of all, I really need to ask you why such a persistance against providing a score? I'm quite curious to know, since other composers, who are pros also, provide scores without much hesitation, unless the scores are published, in which case there's a very strong reason why they shouldn't be online!
I liked the piece rather a lot, found the Am motif successfully used. The recording is quite bad, I don't know the circumstances, but I don't think it's easily saved through digital plug-ins (you could remove the noise (hissing) however). Without score and with such a bad recording, I'm sorry to say, it's difficult to make any decent feedback and provide valid comments really. It's hard to make out what's going on!
I did like the introduction and the ending more than the middle part. Language felt a tiny bit stagnant and static, but it's a stylistic issue, more than anything else I find, so... Tempo and dynamics in the recording are flat, I'm sorry to say as well. Sorry also for returning to the quality of the recording, but there's nothing else to talk about, since you've not given us the score.
