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Some of the notation with the double stops is funky. You can't sustain all 4 notes for that amount of time in some parts (that section at 34). I know if something is written in a quicker temp you can write equal length notes from a quad stop... but not this slow... you are gonna have to make the bottom two notes shorter in length... an eighth or a quarter.
Some of the bowings would be awkward because of your slurs, I'll have to look back where.
Very nice otherwise.
The piano harmony is a little boring, and the arpeggios get a little old.
At least you inverted some chords :-p
Okay, I'm done.
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