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Old Jun 10 2008, 2:30 AM
DrPangloss DrPangloss is offline

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Well, thank you.

Where were there specific lyrics that you took issue with? I know the ones that I wish flowed better, but I'm curious as to which you felt needed tightening. Also, any suggestions are more than welcome, but really I just need a feel for where you got uncomfortable with it.
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