FINALE NOTEPAD GO!!
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Good transitions so far.. really has it's own unique style compared to the other Armageddons.. I think the voices could be balanced better but that's Finale's fault.
There is a lot of whole notes here, but I don't think it's a bad thing. I think you could have done a bit more with the climaxes, after the viola run near the beginning and the timpani entrance. So.. OK,the melody is definitely clear enough, though I think it could do with some more variation. Transitions are perfect.. I swear I keep hearing the title sung by the strings at the end o.O Very nice!