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So what is your organization. I'm guessing, but it seems like -intro A B A B' C D B'' B''' B
Then you end, and I think it's kind of abrupt. Lead us into the ending a little more, because you are going along in your final B, and then suddenly you decided to end. Let the listeners know it's coming, we like predictablility, especially these days. I like the song, very peaceful and relaxing.
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